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Neon Fever Dream is a gripping thriller set at Burning Man

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I chose this excerpt because it weaves together the most important elements of the story: international intrigue based on real-world issues, psychological thrills with lots of personal twists/turns/lessons-learned, and unique Burning Man setting.

Smaller stages stood to either side, the backlit shadows of naked dancers spinning and entwining on massive canvas screens.

Derek, Marlon, and the Vikings cheered the move, and one passed a plastic bottle filled with more champagne.

Asha took a swig—the dust had parched her throat, and she welcomed the sparkling relief.

The crowd milled and migrated toward the exit.

Once Lynn and Asha had made their way out of Green Ocean and located their bikes, they started pedaling back to Camp Wino.

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